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questionsWhat is this feeling I feel This emptiness that dwells in my chest Why do I feel this pain What is this loneliness weighing me down When I'm surrounded by faceless demonic grinsquestions
Is it because of what I have lost Or will never have again Perhaps I never had it in the first place How do I salvage what's been ravaged
This pain is immense Indescribable Unexplainable Excruciating
Why am I lamenting I still don't know Maybe I have incurred God's wrath This troublesome brutal anguish aches And I detest this despicable show of we
by ~jins-girl21
our poemAngels weep Mortals mourn The beasts howlour poem
Time burns away your sorrows Burns a hole in your heart where love used to be and where nothing remains
In my shattered mind chaotic gloom swarms
Yet again I fall into a never-ending perilous chasm of morbid depression and distress
My ears twitch at the sound of my name
My eyes light up at the recognizing the voice
I look up from the depths of hell And smile... Slowly the wound closes and the pain eases My spirit soars
An almost forgotten feeling fills the abyss in my heart
by ~jins-girl21
heartbreak againwe tried again and i ended up crying again is there a point to this?heartbreak again
is it worth the risk? You obstinatly refuse to make the change we need no matter how much i plead
whaT did i ask for thats to much
or do0 u think i clung to much? my wish wasfor you to want me even that you couldnt grant all i asked was to be treated rite yet begging for that turned into a fite my willingness to make any sacrifice for us now llays in the dust is it meant to be or are we deluded perhapes its my destiny to be secluded despite my efforts we grow apart needless to say so
by ~jins-girl21
unfaithful heartWhen will this foolishness cease this pain is akin to a diseaseunfaithful heart
Why won’t my stubborn heart let go when my head is pleading at it to be free You rest in bliss unaware something is amiss
My traitorous mind deceives me convincing me I’m strong I’ve moved on yet that’s so wrong The cynic in me laughs cruelly at my defeated broken heart that defies reason in spite of the repeated aching anguish I warned you the cynic says you deserve this
This wretched pain won’t leave
I feel the disapproval of others watching me grieve
I lay here weeping as you
by ~jins-girl21
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In cold bloodI have blood on my hands Thick and heavy it is Weighing hard on my mind And torturing my heartIn cold blood
She was travelling by And singing merrily When fog enveloped me And voices clutched my mind
In cold blood, I killed her Silently, ruthlessly Saw my hands on her neck And her eyes growing cold
My pulse beat in my ears Fire blinded my eyes My arms did not quiver I squeezed impassively
I have blood on my hands I will not deny it And so now, I join her In this cold, senseless death
by =Elorine
Release“You’re awake…” a soft, even voice beckoned through the haze.Release
It had been calling to him gently, like a beacon of light through the fog of his aching, feverish head for quite some time now, he realized, despite the overpowering confusion which now flooded over him. That voice was the only certain thing left in his whole being. It had kept him from being drawn to the tempting, abysmal darkness just beneath, kept him afloat in that sea of lethargic helplessness, and now, called him to shore…And though his eyelashes at last fluttered open, ever so slowly, suddenly being conscious again brought him no solace at all, from his distre
by *nimbusthedragon
Faded SmileI took away your smile on your face The look you have now is my own disgrace If we met now like nothing ever happened, if you forget my past, Would we fall in again just as fast? If I was only yours and only yours once more Could we hold it together and let our hearts soar? My past in my cries What we had in my eyes It must be too late The expression on your face shows my fate Why I did what I did I’m still not sure A memory was the only lure I tried to tell you how sorry I was, for everything But at least I tried, something.Faded Smile
by ~LoneWolf117
Confronting the TruthShe cares about him so much, Your nothing compared to him. He's everything she wants, Your everything she hates. So many similarities, and yet so different. He loves you now, and I never stopped, And I forever will, will he? You give me hope in life, He's looking foward in life. You may lose him at anytime, I've lost you so many times, I wish I could do something, He's afraid to say something. There's nothing left for me to do. There's something left for him and you.Confronting the Truth
by ~Nightmare05-gotr
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My baby's are both at school now ...
That means I is getting old !!
Geez they grow so fast.
What u been up to ?
I think my nick there was tishidelishi or something, it's been so long. Great to see you and sssam are together.
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